Reading Love and Lifesense

Feb 13, 2002 10:31 # 2041

null mindlessly drivels...

A serious poem for Orchid

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Okay. Some time ago, Orchid asked me for a love poem. This is the result, and don't worry, the real proposal will be much better. :-)
English or USAian people please don't feel offended by the bad English or because some parts don't really rhyme.

*ahem.*

When I see neighbour's children play
run around and fight and scream
then I occasionally stay
in my bed and start to dream

how it'd be to have a house
on a suburban avenue
together with a lovely spouse
to be exact, together with you. :-)

We'd have two children and a dog
(or even more, if you insist)
And I would have a full-time job
and you're a part-time journalist.

Then in the evening we'd play
out in the garden, and then stay
to drink a glass of wine or so
or smoke some grass that I would grow. :-)

We'd love and argue, laugh and cry
go on expensive holidays
watch our children go to school
and maybe build a swimming-pool.

All this I wish to have someday
and hope for you this is okay.
So, this I mean and hope you'll see -
Will you sometime marry me?

When life hands you a lemon, that's 40% of your RDA of vitamin C taken care of.

Feb 13, 2002 12:50 # 2043

Orchid *** replies...

Re: A serious poem for Orchid

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Oh dear is this I waited for
so long and else impatient

you did so well I can't believe
this exceeds my wildest dreams

now I'm sitting here and smiling brightly
wish you to be here

oh would you know how deep in love I am
with you my love my only life

all you said stands before my eye and the sun's
shining brightly, too - aye aye

I'd much love to realize all this and I believe in you
so take my hand, unveil the face and kiss it as you feel

the answer, dear, no question here, can only be a
clearest yes

"Sie wollen nichts anderes. Sie wollen kämpfen! Sie sind Soldaten! Fucking Wahnsinnige!" - Noel G.

Feb 13, 2002 12:56 # 2044

null has an idea...

Re: A serious poem for Orchid

So pick me up at 4 o'clock
And then we shall go home and
do whatever you like!

When life hands you a lemon, that's 40% of your RDA of vitamin C taken care of.

May 19, 2002 21:30 # 3351

skelmonkey * replies...

Re: A serious poem for Orchid

wow...
I didn't know you 2 were an "item"
keep it up....you're good people....

May 20, 2002 08:57 # 3355

Orchid *** replies...

Re: A serious poem for Orchid

Thank you! :-)

"Sie wollen nichts anderes. Sie wollen kämpfen! Sie sind Soldaten! Fucking Wahnsinnige!" - Noel G.


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